Need help writing new FlagRSP description

[Leothiel]

Right now, my FlagRSP description can be best described as added-on patchwork. Leothiel has gone through some physical and personal changes.nnPhysical Characteristics:nAverage height for an elfnVery young (~35 years at time of character generation, may have to "age" in a retcon, currently 36 years old)nVery pallid complexion with white hairnHad a pair of white wings grow from exposure to the Well of Eternity ("Tormenting Visions" thread has this, and there are winged elves in the WoW universe: http://www.wowwiki.com/Felblood_elf. Leothiel's transformation parodies the felblood transformation.)nWears wedding band and family signet ring on the right hand and both caster rings on the left handnHas the Sin'dorei Sunhawk symbol tatooed the upper right arm and his family crest tatooed on the upper left armnnPersonal Characteristics:nVery patriotic with a sense of group identity and expects others to have itnCan be defensive at times